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Yggdrasil
Acid Rain Clan Member
Number of posts : 795
Age : 33
Location : Germany, Reutlingen
Registration date : 2008-11-13
|  Subject: Poem Sat Apr 04, 2009 3:41 pm | |
| We have no poem topic, so I thought we might have one.
I am not a good writer, but i like it.
I would please you to make fair critique and constuctive comments
So here the 1st comes
Insight
Fulfilled by all my strain
Can not stop this desperation
cankered by all my pain
my junction, my summarization | |
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{AR}Edge
Acid Rain Clan Member
Number of posts : 151
Age : 39
Location : Buffalo, New York, USA
Registration date : 2009-03-16
| | Subject: Re: Poem Sat Apr 04, 2009 4:50 pm | |
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Yggdrasil
Acid Rain Clan Member
Number of posts : 795
Age : 33
Location : Germany, Reutlingen
Registration date : 2008-11-13
| | Subject: Re: Poem Sun Apr 05, 2009 4:35 am | |
| ty (:
But I prefer metal ^^ | |
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MC Pusteblume
Acid Rain Clan Member
Number of posts : 49
Location : Germany
Registration date : 2009-02-02
| | Subject: Re: Poem Sun Apr 05, 2009 5:14 am | |
| pain, desperation.........argh! It really makes me sad!  So keep on writing, hehe  | |
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Yggdrasil
Acid Rain Clan Member
Number of posts : 795
Age : 33
Location : Germany, Reutlingen
Registration date : 2008-11-13
| | Subject: Re: Poem Sun Apr 05, 2009 6:16 am | |
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EV3RY
Acid Rain Clan Member
Number of posts : 502
Age : 26
Location : Engerland
Registration date : 2008-07-21
| | Subject: Re: Poem Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:30 am | |
| There was a young boy from Japan
Whose limericks never quite went to plan
When he was asked why,
He said in reply,
"I always try to fit too many syllables into the last line."
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A preoccupied vegan named Hugh
Picked up the wrong sandwich to chew.
He took a big bite
Before spitting, in fright,
"OMGWTFBBQ!" | |
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{AR}USAGirl
Acid Rain Clan Admin
Number of posts : 179
Age : 40
Registration date : 2008-07-25
| | Subject: Re: Poem Sun Apr 12, 2009 8:34 pm | |
| This Poem I wrote when my husband aka {AR}Blancodraco and I first got together....
Loneliness
The loneliness is covering me
Tears running down my cheeks
I feel so alone in this world
I wonder if anyone loves me
I wish someone will hold me
I closed my eyes, wishing the loneliness will go away
All of sudden...I felt a hand on my shoulder
I looked up, I see you smiling at me
Then I realized I am not alone anymore | |
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Ninjadeer
Acid Rain Clan Member
Number of posts : 1422
Registration date : 2008-07-04
| | Subject: Re: Poem Mon Apr 13, 2009 2:59 am | |
| Wow Usa! beautifull poem! | |
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Sweetness
Acid Rain Clan Member
Number of posts : 236
Age : 108
Location : New York, USA
Registration date : 2008-07-03
| | Subject: Re: Poem Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:45 am | |
| - EV3RY wrote:
- A preoccupied vegan named Hugh
Picked up the wrong sandwich to chew.
He took a big bite
Before spitting, in fright,
"OMGWTFBBQ!" Lol that is the funny. | |
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Major Zeman
Acid Rain Clan Leader
Number of posts : 1421
Location : Czech Republic
Registration date : 2008-07-26
| | Subject: Re: Poem Mon Apr 13, 2009 11:21 am | |
| I think I'll have to stop reading this thread.
It's making me want to request my developers to speed up the programming of my PDA (Poem Detection and Analysis) Module. | |
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{AR}USAGirl
Acid Rain Clan Admin
Number of posts : 179
Age : 40
Registration date : 2008-07-25
| | Subject: Re: Poem Tue Apr 14, 2009 8:45 am | |
| - Ninjadeer wrote:
- Wow Usa! beautifull poem!
thanks | |
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{AR}ARNOLD
Acid Rain Clan Member
Number of posts : 307
Age : 40
Registration date : 2008-07-06
| | Subject: Re: Poem Wed Apr 15, 2009 6:54 am | |
| =) yea you have the skill to write usa =) | |
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